On Monday I made a sandcastle with fine brown sand. On the top we put four long and skinny sticks. We decorated it with white and orange stripy shells to make the sandcastle look pretty. I made the sandcastle with Natsuko and Jennifer.
On Monday I made a sandcastle in the sand pit. The sandcastle had many shells and sticks. The shells were bumpy, stripy and round. The sticks were long and straight.
On Monday I made a sandcastle with Ji won and Natsuko. We made one big sandcastle together. Our sandcastle was made out of grey, dry sand. We decorated the sandcastle with bumpy, white shells.
We made sandcastles in the sandpit and wrote stories about them. Our goal was to use different sentence starters. I made a sandcastle. There are three sticks on the top. At the bottom are some shells. Jason
My sandcastle has white shells on it. It has some sticks on the top. Yea Jin
My sandcastle has shells on it. It has sticks on the top. Amelie
I put some white shells on my sandcastle. I put some sticks on it. Laiba
Last week we made a sandcastle in the sandpit. Our goal was to write a story about our sandcastle using two describing words. Here are our stories: We made a sandcastle. I put lots of white shells in a circle shape. Eric
I built a sandcastle with round shells. I put five long sticks on the top. Marcus
We made a sandcastle with white shells on it. I put a big pieces of bark on it. Thomas
I went to the Library yesterday. The picture books are on the bottom shelf. I can borrow a book from Desna. She is the Librarian. I like reading some picture books at the Library.
I have been learning about the library. I saw some Korean books in the ESOL box. I can borrow these books from the Librarian. I like to look at the picture books.
On Saturday and Sunday my mom, sister, little sister and I went Nelson and Hanmer Springs. I went there for a horse race. First I had to do horse jumping and then the horse had to walk carefully. After that the horse had to run fast. So I was lucky and I got the trophy. It was really exciting because it was my second horse race. By Soo Hong
Today on the 27th of October at ESOL I learnt about synonyms. I had to do a piece of paper about them. I learnt that synonyms means if you have a word say, big you look for a word that means the same like giant/large. Synonyms always mean the same. If you use synonyms in your writing your writing will be much better.
Today I learned about Synonyms.Synonyms have the same meanings but are different words.I like learning about Synonyms beacause they make reading and writing exciting.
At the Mall I tried to put on my shoes and my foot didn't fit in. Then I went to the Food Court. I ate a hamburger. It was bad because it had vegetables in it. I put the paper in the bin. I went to my house and sat on the sofa. By Louie
At the Mall I went shopping. I ate a hamburger. It was yummy because I like hamburgers. I drank Cola. I like going to the Mall. By Yusuke